In this meeting, Olivia and I talked about my final draft of project 1. This paper was peer reviewed, and I had looked over it many times. With Olivia, I read the paper out loud, and we discussed several portions in the paragraphs. I even found some things to edit after reading the to someone else.
We also discussed how to elaborate more on the quotation aspect of the writing, as an evidence based connection, rather than just jumping into the commentary. This is important when setting up any paragraph, and I changed part of my paper based on Olivia’s suggestions. Overall, it was a very helpful meeting.
